http://urbanseniorportraits.com/blog/senior-photography/100-urgent-please-answer.html On Location Portrait Photography Fri, 02 Jul 2010 20:02:36 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 http://urbanseniorportraits.com/blog/senior-photography/100-urgent-please-answer.html/comment-page-1#comment-911 kieran Thu, 28 Jan 2010 00:52:00 +0000 http://urbanseniorportraits.com/blog/senior-photography/100-urgent-please-answer.html#comment-911 The first paragraph is needed, but lengthy. Try to remove some of the description while still keeping the point of the speech tied in. You should also mention early on that there is only a Senior Prom at this high school. The second paragraph is good overall but could be slightly condensed. I believe it does prove a good point though. Very persuasive. The first paragraph is needed, but lengthy. Try to remove some of the description while still keeping the point of the speech tied in. You should also mention early on that there is only a Senior Prom at this high school. The second paragraph is good overall but could be slightly condensed. I believe it does prove a good point though. Very persuasive.

]]> http://urbanseniorportraits.com/blog/senior-photography/100-urgent-please-answer.html/comment-page-1#comment-910 nats b Wed, 27 Jan 2010 20:43:14 +0000 http://urbanseniorportraits.com/blog/senior-photography/100-urgent-please-answer.html#comment-910 you would need to make it sound a bit more professional and not so childlike. otherwise its good you would need to make it sound a bit more professional and not so childlike.
otherwise its good

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